Rebeca Manjarrez Patria Wright Writing 150 24 October 2013 Too Much of A Good Thing Blunt Voice, Negative Connotations, and Anecdotes In Turkle’s “Can You Hear Me Now?” The creation and development of smart phones has increased dramatically over the past couple of years, becoming a major part of people’s lives and society as a whole. In May of 2007, “Can You Hear Me Now?” was an article published in Forbes magazine, a magazine for the world’s business leaders. The article discussed the issue of how people were letting smart phones, among other technology, run their lives. Sherry Turkle, who is a licensed clinical psychologist, and author of The Second Self: Computers and the Human Spirit writes about how technology has not only come to connect people, but alienate them from the physical world as well. As Turkle addresses her audience, she views them also as those who are tech-savvy, seeing as how they are in the business world they own laptops, smart phones and PDAs. Sherry Turkle uses a blunt voice, negative connotations, and anecdotes to create an ethical and emotional appeal to effectively convince business leaders that allowing technology to take a hold of their lives on an intimate level is blurring the lines between what reality is, and what it isn’t. In her opening paragraph, Turkle uses a conference she attended as an anecdote to establish the issue and make an ethical appeal. She describes what she sees, and how many of the people attending the conference aren’t paying attention, but are rather caught up in “…doing their e-mail, downloading files, surfing the Web or looking for a cartoon to illustrate an upcoming presentation” (Turkle 206). By sharing this experience with her audience, Turkle builds on her credibility as the writer because the audience can see that she too is experienced in business, and well aware of what takes place on around her.
"Can You Hear Me Now" Analysis of Sherry Trukle's Essay
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ur Today it is very easy to get tethered to electronics and communications that give you instant results. A quick check on networking site is becoming the norm verses actually picking up the phone and calling the person you are catching up with. Sherry Turkle, in her essay “Can You Hear Me Now?,” discusses points and personal experiences that persuade the reader that today’s society is becoming “more connected- or more alienated”, than ever before. Turkle utilizes the pathos appeal by using the rhetorical appeals of anecdotes, assertion, and reasoning. She relies heavily on the use of pathos throughout the entire article. This is important because it gets the reader involved in the story and sets the stage for the entire article.…show more content…
In this society many people completely immerse themselves in a new life that often times leads to distractions within their real life. Turkle states, “For those who are lonely yet fearful of intimacy, online life provides environments where one can be a loner yet not alone, have the illusion of companionship without the demands of sustained, intimate friendship”. This statement supports her overall claim that the addiction to technology leads to a person alienating themselves. A person could have the greatest life in an online environment and not even leave their house. This continues to lead the reader to the second trouble of her soul by setting them up emotionally. In this instance Turkle is trying to elicit a reaction of feeling sorry for the people reading her essay.
She continues to use pathos to describe how people spend more time finding about their life and what is happening in it by the use of BlackBerry’s and constant checking of e-mails. “Think of the BlackBerry user watching the BlackBerry movie of his life as someone watching a movie that takes on a life of its own”. (Turkle) Here she uses another anecdote to describe a person watching their life go by tying them into another electronic device that shuts off the rest of the world physically and emotionally. This is another good example of being